>>9639
Dang, I came on here to say just this. Oh well. For what it's worth, page 14's "splorp" seemed to me to be the guardian's flesh being unattached from it's flesh chair. I assumed the gnome was doing a happy dance on page 36.
>>9572
I agree with the general sentiment, though. The motion in the combat scene is pretty good, but in noncombative scenes you never really have a sense of movement. In a lot of ways this is really good. The entire hrobac walking sequence shows this pretty well. It's like a bunch of snapshots of the landscape, showing the sheer scope of the environment, it's grotesque complexity, and how the hrobac exists within it, culminating in the beautiful spread at the end. That's done phenomenally. You seem to suffer a little bit when you need to show movement in these scenes, though. My biggest example is the very first panel, actually. What is the gnome doing here? Is it holding on to the wall and then letting go? Is it falling already? Is it laying down and then a trick of gravity pulls it off? Movement lines like the one you put on the orifice opening are a good solution, but I might advise you to try and approach scenes with a lot of movement outside of combat the same way you would if the character was fighting someone - to an extent, of course! It wold be unwise to draw every panel like a combat scene. I think a lot of the beauty of this comic comes from the painting-style panels, and I think you should take heart in being really good at that.
Something else that bothered me was the speech bubble size. Usually it's fine, but when a character, especially the gnome, has only one word to say, you still give them a huge speech bubble that takes up more space than justified; it crowds out the panel. The hrobac meeting has a lot of these, like when the gnome says "hey" on page 31 and "what a surprise" on page 36. Even if there's nothing interesting going on behind the speech bubble, even if it's just a solid block of color, it's good to let that art breath. Of course, there is a lot of white space a speech bubble needs to work, so don't crowd them. Again, most of the bubbles are fine, but some of the shorter ones take up too much space. It does make me kind of curious if you're translating this for us before you share it, though; the only other time I've seen space in bubbles like that is in manga translations, when the differing direction of language makes it difficult to make the English text look right sometimes because there's so much less of it. It's also clever to use different colors for the speech bubbles like you do, as the reader never has any confusion as to who is talking.
Something else I appreciate is that you never forget the hrobac's antenna. When drawing a character with antenna, it's easy to brush them aside when the environment makes it inconvenient for the character to have them, but the hrobac's antenna never go away and always interact with wherever they are. You're also really good about remembering those sticks the hrobac is carrying. It's again easy to just not draw them because it's inconvenient for the character to need to climb and such with them, but aside from the cliff face into the damaged machinery, they're always there. Keep doing that! The antenna in particular are very important! Don't let us cramp your artistic vision neither. If you believe something absolutely has to be done a certain way, then you should do it that way. I do hope that our comments can help you improve your work in earnest.
As for file hosting, it's pretty difficult outside of those major file hosting services. There's Proton Drive, which is supposedly a privacy friendly company and would allow you to have convenient cloud storage too, but I never see anyone else use it and I think sharing with it is difficult; you likely would also have to spend money eventually to be able to fit all of your chapters. There is sites like Catbox, but I think most people hate those kind of websites too, and you would have to manually keep track of the links to be able to reshare them. You could make your own website and host your content there, like through Neocities or something else, but that's a lot of frontend work for you and would likely cost you money. All in all, there's not really a good way to simply host files, sorry to say.
I'm curious if the oneshot you posted a while back will tie into this? Will we see that blonde girl?